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by Simbalion
Tue Oct 13, 2020 4:09 pm
Forum: Project Articles
Topic: Clean-tech - World's Most Powerful & Safest UVC Air Purifier
Replies: 21
Views: 19961

Re: Clean-tech - World’s Most Advanced UVC Air Purifier - Feedback Giveaway

Sorry for the late reply -- been swamped at work. :) I took a look at the revisions on the page, and they look great! I especially like the new product graphics. Your message is getting much clearer, which is always what I look for in a campaign. You just gotta hammer home the HEPA + the only medica...
by Simbalion
Sat Oct 03, 2020 1:53 am
Forum: Project Articles
Topic: Clean-tech - World's Most Powerful & Safest UVC Air Purifier
Replies: 21
Views: 19961

Re: Clean-tech - World’s Most Advanced UVC Air Purifier - Feedback Giveaway

I have a bunch of experience with air purifiers, and I actually have had a few with UVC in my home right now. Also, have a background in marketing, so hopefully you don't take offense at some of the more honest feedback. You have a very confusing story. I *think* you are trying to convey a story of ...
by Simbalion
Thu Feb 28, 2019 1:44 am
Forum: Project Articles
Topic: The World's Most Eco-Friendly Shoe by UnitedbyBlue x SOLE - Feedback Giveaway (Valid till March 4th, 2019)
Replies: 25
Views: 38766

Re: The World's Most Eco-Friendly Shoe by UnitedbyBlue x SOLE - Feedback Giveaway (Valid till March 4th, 2019)

Your initial impressions of the campaign page. Does it motivate you to continue reading after looking at it for 15 seconds? The page is nicely structured, but I think you're assuming that visitors will actually read through the entire length of the page in the way some of the more important sections...